3rd Quarter Magazine Submission

For my 3rd Quarter submission I closely revised my whole four page spread through feedback that I have received. For my cover I adjusted font size, font type and spacing to better emulate professional products. The same revisions were applied to my table of contents with both of the layouts remaining the same as I received praise for those aspects. For my two age spread I drastically changed from my original edit to better compliment the layout set by professional magazines by adding margins and nit having a full page photo for my article. I also revised the wording in my article and better introduced the research put into the article. I added an extra photo to add more diversity on the page and to minimize whit space on the page. all together these revisions crafted my final product which accomplishes my goals of looking professionally but also unique to stand out from other magazines in the industry.

Revisions- Table of Contents

After consideration and peer viewing of my magazine submission I have decided to make some fine tuning revisions to my table of contents. I adjusted my font sizing to better fit the page and my font type to better emulate the tone I want to put off from this magazine which is elegance and professionalism. I also adjusted spacing between text to make the ease of reading for subscribers easier and more concise. My picture was well regarded as well as my title and layout so thise remained unchanged.

Revisions- Cover

After feedback from my midterm magazine cover I decided to make some fine detail edits to my cover. Font size and font type were altered to match more professional styles of magazines that set precedent for my magazine. The picture was highly regarded so I decided not to edit that for my cover. I also took into consideration the regards on my spacing so I decided to further space out subheadings for ease of read for my subscribers.