Revisions- Two Page Spread

For my revisions on my two page spread I took into the account the criticisms I was given when the class reviewed my midterm version of this magazine. In order to make my magazine issue for presentable and professional I created a spread with a white  background and text that was bounded by margins. My text size and spacing was based off of precedent set by major magazines in the industry. I also laid out my photos and tittle based on what was seen from industry standards while I was researching. I also edited my text and better phrased my writing within the text to match industry standards. All criticisms I heard were fixed within this two page spread giving me a final product that is not only professional in style but attractive for readers.